vanguardthegame.com continents.vm page needs proofreading

Discussion in 'Website Feedback' started by ARCHIVED-skwerl, Aug 7, 2012.

  1. http://www.vanguardthegame.com/continents.vm

    on the Thestra page it talks about Borindar's cleft, should be Bordinar's Cleft unelss you really renamed that city

    on the Kojan page you say "Orc and Goblins often aid unskilled adventures loose their wares." what are you even trying to say here? even spelled correctly and using the correct words (lose instead of loose) this doesn't make any sense
    and hasn't Ca'ial Brael always had puncutation as part of its name?

    Qalia looks good
    shiny, brand spankin' new website with lots of things trying to keep up hype and lore, disappointing to see the errors on it though
  2. shameless bump, isn't this something that could be fixed pretty easily? makes me sad that it's been up from day 1 with these oddities

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